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SECRET SEVEN HILLS

The city that was once famous for its amber glow that shrouded the skyline and clouds that reigned over the sky, giving Sheffield its reputation as the steel city of England. This once industrial city is now fast becoming the UK hub for all things that scream outdoors. Once the steel industry elapsed we were left with vast spaces of greenery that the mountain biking scene has thrived off. Upon first observations Sheffield does not appear to be a place where the adrenaline pumping sport occurs but what racer could resist the temptations of the seven hills.

Not only is Sheffield the place for biking it is also one of the top destinations for you whether it being walking, running or climbing. Sheffield has something for you! People often say that Yorkshire births the best athletes and sporting personalities alike. From the likes of three-time world champion Jessica Ennis to national, European and world downhill champion Steve Peat.

More specifically, Sheffield is fast becoming known as the hub for all things mountain biking for both business and riders alike. In recent years a whole host of business are basing themselves out of Sheffield including Cotic Bikes, Airdrop Bikes and Planet X This combined with Sheffield’s ideal location being perched on the doorstep on the Peak District region, results in many local riders and those from a further afield coming to experience the unique terrain.

Riders of all ages tame the trails at Peaty's Steel City Downhill Race.

So what makes Sheffield so special?

The city offers various riding locations, which allow a range of riders to access. Whether you are a university student or a full time worker. There is a track from you. Sheffield’s tracks appeal to all levels of riders. If you are a beginner, the tracks on Grenocide woods allow you to ease your way into the bumps and burms of the sport but if you are looking for something more thrilling then Wharncliffe is the place to go. These woods offer challenge with their steep and technical tracks pushing you into difficult but promising race, with racing legend Steve Peat at the for front of the development of these trails and ambition to “have fun and help others to achieve their goals” now retired.

Not only is Sheffield geographically perfect for downhill racing, the acknowledgements that have followed with the popularity are the numerous clubs for young ones. From the wealth of sporting clubs available to students in all walks of life, through to the clubs for veterans of the MTB scene and pros alike. The scene is booming and locals love it.

Local rider Kyle Brooks tearing up the tracks

We spoke to Steve about his experience with downhill biking...

How did you get started in racing?

“Joined a local MTB group and entered one for their XC races at Rother valley. I was 17/18 so quite late starter.”

Is there a specific preparation routine before you race?

“Yes, the same one I have used for the last 20+years, Warm ups and routines really help being prepared for a race.”

 Of all the tracks and trails you have ridden in your career which would you say is your favourite and why?

“I have fun in most places I ride so it is hard to pick one, if you are with the right people anywhere is good, some of my best times have been with mates on my local trails Sheffield.”

What do you enjoy most about the downhill scene?

“Riding great tracks, going fast and the people.”

Upon observation Sheffield does not appear to be a place where the adrenalin pumping sport occurs with its calming atmosphere but what racer could resist the seven hills?